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:iconmantuks:
Dear Artist,
This is my first critique on this website so bare with me.
Before i start i wanted to say that i am a big Urban fan and settings like this.
I really do like this picture, very good composition and choice of an angle to take the picture. Very detail and good qualiti of the image, no big signs of noise, thats a plus. Good choice for post processing to make angles of the picture darker, that gives some sort of deph of field to the image and sets the mood. Shadow could use different pose, but its photographers preference and this position fits in the image as well and looks darn good, one on the rail looks distorted but that is what the lighting did to it. Everything looks perfect and it is a good shot, light from the above the stairs to the wall on the right gives extra detail to the image and makes it lighter, otherwise it would seam too dark.
Now i gave 4 stars for technique and i would like to explain why i did that. There is a car on the left bottom corner, its not that much distracting because you focus on the silhouette and stairs first. What i would have done is made corner shadow a little bigger of seen if the car could be moved. Otherwise i would say you did very good job on the picture and keep them coming! i love photography and i would love to critique other pictures you took or will take in the future.

Sincerely,
Mantas K.
slickphotography.com
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NIKON CORPORATION
NIKON D300
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Jul 4, 2009, 9:27:59 PM

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