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:iconlemsc:
It's a very Great Shot. I really like it: Dark, powerful.
It's seem to me that the oppressive environment is very well returned.
About the critique:
For me, the leg of right-hand side of the character is not shaded enough, especially in its upper part.
The character should perhaps have been more still blurred / almost transparent (it's my opinion).
The shadows on the right wall could be accentuated.
With regard to the remainder of the photo, the management of the light is perfect. The choice of the two-color dark-green / black printing is excellent because it's reinforce the glaucous environment of this stairs.
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:icontiadanko:
I like "ghosts pictures" like this one
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:iconnoborders:
... en tous cas, moi, j'adore, la silhouette n'a pas besoin d'être transparente en ce qui me concerne et je suis contente d'en voir une plutôt qu'un espace sans personne, ça ajoute quelque chose à l'ambiance à mon avis (et je dois encore ré;pondre à ce que tu m'avais écrit il y a peu, ça viendra - promis !).
:iconknytcrawlr:
now THIS is an ominous, dark picture of the unknown, great work

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Round and round the world we go, we don't die of time, we die of vertigo... - Eric Draven

Maybe I'm lame...but ANY feedback on my work is appreciated - G.

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NIKON CORPORATION
NIKON D300
4/1 second
F/8.0
18 mm
200
Jun 14, 2009, 10:14:27 PM

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