Okay, let me to criticize your artwork. For the first, your photo more impressive to the atmosphere after the rain not on when it rains. Lack of an impression water drips from the sky. The impression of the floor which are wet and the walls of being mossy one of the benefits that covers some weakness your photos. If your camera lenses focus more to the plants to match the composition of the photo that you generate. And works of art you may would be appropriate if you give a title "Setelah Hujan". I'm sorry if my English was bad.
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