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Hujanby *bwiti

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Category: Photography / Urban & Rural / City Life

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Critique by *JayBrave Dec 17, 2012, 10:50:29 AM
I can't really critique this particular piece because I'm not a photographer, but I think you should've tried a different angle on this one for the people who can't identify the object in the picture. At the same time if you tried another angle it would have awkwardly taken away from the impact of object due to the low visibility caused by the rain. I know and understand what the object is and is supposed to represent but I'm not sure if you want others to guess at what the object is to further impact them when they realize the intention of the piece. I hope this was at least a little helpful for you.

Sincerely, Jay
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*feldrand Feb 12, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
well, i found this photo while browsing for something else... i didn't answer, because i knew then i would be coming back one day fro further investigation... in fact this picture kept soert of haunting me, it's very nice, and i don't agree with the critic of "jaybrave" although i see his point... :D
it's typical for me to aske fro the rain and not for the tomb, haha... :D
i simply got curious from this photo and wanted to see more, i was not disappointed and i hope to come back one day to see more... :D
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~smeredith Jan 12, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
Hey, what camera/lens do you use?
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*bwiti Jan 13, 2013
d300 + 50mm
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~smeredith Jan 16, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
oh nice, i just bought a 50mm. is it 1.8 or 1.4?
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*bwiti Jan 16, 2013
1.4 :)
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~stickersticker Dec 25, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I've been coming back to look at this picture a whole bunch, I really love it. I just read the critique and I realized that I actually don't know what the "object" is in the photo. What is it?
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*bwiti Dec 26, 2012
a tomb
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~stickersticker Dec 30, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Oh right, I was expecting that.
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*feldrand Dec 18, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
wow, i just stumbled across this fine photo - so very special and nice... :D
what is that flying through air? is it raining or are there seeds flying?
i often tried to take photos of flying seeds, but never succeeded...
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