because i'm too lazy to write a critique, here's a shortened version-- Things I love: the idea and your timing; also framed very nicely Things that I personally don't like so much (and I'm going to be picky now): the stopping car in the left centre is rather distracting, especially as it's red and the viewer's eye will immediately be drawn to the bright colour. the framing (yes I'm contradicting myself). Let me clarify: I like the tree framing, but the overall photo/the subject is rather centered--in this case, I don't like it as much because there is too much space on the right and it's almost unbalanced. now if only the subject was wearing a brighter colour... but of course, you couldn't have controlled that I'm guessing xp but overall, it's a nice photo. je l'aime beaucoup
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