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Le journal - Block DCXII by bwiti Le journal - Block DCXII by bwiti
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Nice work!
You seemed to have captured a little piece of 'real life'. It's not sunny, the pavements aren't clear, the old car isn't a 1970s Porsche - it's reality. It's city life, and in an unexpected way, I'd say it's a beautiful photo.
The bike and the car are both old fashioned. This works really well because it draws interest in the way that a Ford Focus and a Ridgeback wouldn't.
I like the litter, the dull grey and brown colours, the fallen leaves, the overcast skies and the graffiti. Like said above^, it's real and it gives character. The photo makes me think of a dilapidated house and abandonment. Everything seems stuck in the past; if you were walking down this street you'd feel the wind on your face, hear your footsteps, maybe see the wind blow up some leaves. The way that the photo is obviously still gives it this air of being stuck in the past, an abandoned street. I love that as well. It's quite nostalgic.
I also like the angle you've shot from. If a pavement has a perspective, this would probably be it. The one thing that annoys be a little is the slab of textured concrete in the bottom left corner - because it's the only thing in the photo that doesn't work perfectly. It breaks up the lines of the vanishing point and it's a bit out of focus. I know this can't be helped though - otherwise, a fantastic shot! :D
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XToriRoseXD Featured By Owner May 31, 2012
thiis is an amazing photo :O great job on it!
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1348249 Featured By Owner May 31, 2012
nice!
i like is
street photos are awesome
and nice Porsche
very HQ photo!
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ramen-color Featured By Owner May 31, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
amazing
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AMAAHT Featured By Owner May 31, 2012  Student Artist
thats Amazing
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DeathOfATragedy Featured By Owner May 31, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
A powerful capture that indicates the dark and filthy areas of the block itself. :)
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:iconbloxo:
Bloxo Featured By Owner May 31, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
It looks like a scene from the movie! Amazing! :-)
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countvladimir Featured By Owner May 31, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
i had to watch you on this site. i love your subjects.
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BronzeSultan Featured By Owner May 31, 2012
This reminds me of Russia in the 90's the fancy car usually belonged to mafia, lol
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Alfaromeo2X Featured By Owner May 30, 2012
NY ?
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:iconbwiti:
bwiti Featured By Owner May 31, 2012
Montreal
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Alfaromeo2X Featured By Owner Jun 7, 2012
Montreal its sexi ...!
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Jakit Featured By Owner May 30, 2012  Student General Artist
Awesome Photo!!! <3 <3 <3 <3
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Stringtone Featured By Owner May 30, 2012
I love that car, that bike,I... I LOVE THIS PIC!! xDD
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SniCky56 Featured By Owner May 30, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
That car is awesome ! :O :)
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nahrain Featured By Owner May 30, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
this is so beautiful...i really love how this scene was set it just takes you back to the intimate old days. thank you for giving us such a feeling.
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Leocervas Featured By Owner May 30, 2012
Wonderful shot!!!
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paradoxistruth Featured By Owner May 30, 2012  Student General Artist
I enjoy how the old car creates the feeling that this is a scene from 40 years ago.
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hellou4 Featured By Owner May 30, 2012
Awesome! :D
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:iconelessar91:
Elessar91 Featured By Owner May 30, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
Wow, super motif!
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NBVega Featured By Owner May 30, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Sweet vintage Raleigh Mixte! I'd love to get my hands on a bike like that :D I love the juxtaposition of the Raleigh and the Mercedes, both somewhat vintage. Very nice.
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SilviaCrespo Featured By Owner May 30, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I love it.
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Ultrasmile Featured By Owner May 30, 2012
Perfect cityscape.
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MoonRaven2 Featured By Owner May 30, 2012
Where was this taken?
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unknownunkown Featured By Owner May 30, 2012
There's something, why you take your camera and just stop, and make a photo of a bike...I've done it many times. :) Since I found your photographs, I like them, and sometimes (many times...) I am envy, how well you can do looks-simple shots. I know, that it's only looks like light-handed work. On this one I especially like the wet, shiny road, the colours (look, the bike's wheel has the same colour then the gate in the back!), and the black Mercedes, the old one, as they stood next to each other, like telling stories, like knowing secrets, who saw all already. Again: I like your pictures so much, you dare to stop for a moment. This is photography. Thank you. Emese from Hungary
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bwiti Featured By Owner May 30, 2012
Thanks:)
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Aalex1 Featured By Owner May 30, 2012
cum dau like?:D
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BAILIBAKER Featured By Owner May 30, 2012
HOT SEE ME IF U SEE
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Sora-Sinyoko Featured By Owner May 30, 2012
<3 So emotional, such a fantastic photo ;v;
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